by Grace
This poem like explains me <3 |
It had a nice flow about it, and the rhymes were okay, but nothing really seemed to jump out to me. However, I do believe that the third and forth stanzas were the best, they had the most amount of power, like 'controlling monster', 'Only I know he's a fake', 'His actions are to spite me' and 'But his coldness made me stronger'. |
Idk why u said this wasn't one of your best. I think it's up there. Great job the flow, and word choice was superb. |
by WaitAutumn
Nice one n_n |