Comments : Thriving On My Heartache

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    This poem like explains me <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    It had a nice flow about it, and the rhymes were okay, but nothing really seemed to jump out to me. However, I do believe that the third and forth stanzas were the best, they had the most amount of power, like 'controlling monster', 'Only I know he's a fake', 'His actions are to spite me' and 'But his coldness made me stronger'.

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Idk why u said this wasn't one of your best. I think it's up there. Great job the flow, and word choice was superb.

    His actions are to spite me,
    Too many times I have been burned
    But his coldness made me stronger,
    Yet another lesson learned

    ^^^^my favorite stanza. wonderful job. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Nice one n_n