Don't U Trust Me

by chris   Apr 20, 2008


I cant stand you getting mad at me, too much aggravating,
you think I'm out wit ya girlfriends, when i want your satisfaction,
Thinking I'm gonna get em, but cant u see,
I'm a real dude that been contemplating you,
If not then what am i suppose to do?,
The world ain't lonely but u got me feeling much like a lonely dude,
More sensitive then a cancer,
Like a crab would've been kinda pinchy if u bit me,
Cant think straight or is it just me,
I was never this lonely, don't u trust me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    It was good, but if i were you id change a few things... to make it easier to read.
    I had to reread it again to actually get the poem, because of the way it was written.. maybe try writing out the words you abbreviated, "u" ="You" things like that, it helps the flow, and its just easier to read.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Lena

    LoL losterr! I like this one a lot too! Keep it upppp.

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Nice poem

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    A Very Sad Poem, But I Like It.
    Keep It Up.
    5/5

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