Jordan, this poem is so sweet...the concept is beautiful, and the flow is nearly perfect. The word choice is very sweet...any girl would love to have a poem like this written about her. whoever you wrote it for is extremely lucky...great job. 5.5

Hey everyone I would love it if you commented on this poem and voted for it. It really means a lot to me and I think I need some prayers so that the girl I wrote this for will forgive me and take me back. Please everyone I ask that you help me.

With love,

Jordan

I love this poem.I can relate a little.I almost feel the same w/ my bf of a yr and 8 months.

It is always fun to return to this and view the poem that I wrote over two years ago. On the day of May 26, 2008 I met a girl who I fell in love with. This poem was originally written for the girlfriend before her, but I quickly dedicated it to the girl I met on the 26th. Her and I are still together to this day, 2 1/2 years later. I'm glad this poem was liked by many, and hope it is still view to this day. Merry Christmas everyone!!!