by Scarlet Angel Apr 20, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She walks this lonely street |
Another beautiful poem, i love how you bring the two together at the end, and it was an excellent choice to use caps and exclamation points after the NOT OKAY part because this whole poem is screaming I'm not okay!!! Beautifully written, 5/5 |
by she
Yay you finally added more poems lol |
Thnx guys!!! =] |
by Miranda
This really amazing. I love how you had it for both gender's because most people think it's just girls.It was honest and emotional.You have talent.A well-deserved 5/5. |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow, thats pretty amazing stuff, really good well doen xx |