This is really good work. well done and keep it up xx

Very touching and sad.
this poem contains sorrow and pain which the writer still suffer from it.

"This pillow..i still remember
You slept on it,it was november...
I watched you sleeping all the time
I trully knew that you were mine."

these lines touched my heart deep

Its a good poem freedom
a vote for u :)
cheers
Biya

The overall write was well done. This piece was a little rocky here and there, but nothing too bad. The flow as ok, and the structure was good besides the last big gap between the last stanza. The imageray was there and was pretty vivid. Great write, keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe