Sad poem very touching feel the same way

Well written, but you should just write more to it. I know you have so much more to say. just pour yur heart out 5/5

Its surley sad...but honestly i think it needs to be longer, and have more emotion added to this..oh and i think this should be put in the sad poems section under lost relationship or somthin, cuz its more sad then friendship...idk...
Aly

Sad....but like neo said you should write more, about how you feel....but overal very good=]