Okay.
Lets start with:

Stanza 1:
"Black poison drips,
Oozing off her lips.
Unseen by all the men,
Who seek to have her then."

-- Loved the imagery in this stanza. Also the use of metaphors! Great introduction, although, in my opinion, it seemed a little like this stanza is only half way, as in, there are more stanza's before this one?? Maybe I interpret wrong, but it is still a good stanza!

Stanza 2:
"Mysterious and Seductive,
She plays her game so destructive.
Poisoning their love,
For their mind's not above."

-- Firstly, loved the use of words, imagery, rhyme, and the structure!! Greatly applied and not many fillers, which is fantastic!! ;]
Loved the words "Destructive", "Seductive", and "Mysterious", which were used and liked their usage as they are-- position ;]

Stanza 3:
"She laughs and winks,
As they bottom out the drinks.
Shot after shot it's madness,
For she's their maiden of sadness."

-- A very mysterious stanza! Makes a dark feeling, and sets a scene, such as a bar maybe? or a pub?? < thought this by the line:
"As they bottom out the drinks."
Very well done..!!

Stanza 4:
"She'll bring them up; Crashing down,
As they cry and turn a frown.
She'll soothe them fast; Slapping hard,
As their face turns crimson; Scarred."

-- A little confusing this stanza, took me a while to realise what you were trying to portray. Eventually it struck me! ;] Also loved the imagery! Especially:
"As their face turns crimson; scarred."
^ Love it. One of my favourite lines!

Stanza 5:
"Black poison drips,
Oozing off her lips.
Now those eyes eclipse,
To the sound of cracking whips."

-- Again, love the repetition!! Eventhough the last two lines are different, I still love it! Almost as if she has finished, it shows the real her:
"Now those eyes eclipse,
To the sound of cracking whips."
^ Very well portrayed! ;]

Poem Conclusion:
Firstly, I know I haven'nt mentioned this in either of the separate stanzas, but...
... RHYME! Brilliant! Words were very creative! Suited the poem well, and as well as the theme and story plot!! Absolutely magnificant! < I was keeping this little comment to last-- HAHA ;]
But yes, brilliant!
Loved the rhythm, the rhyme, the structure (I have noticed you have used 4-lined stanza's x 5 in alot of your work!!), and also the whole idea of the poem.
Brilliant piece of work.
<3
Good Job! Keep it up! <3
- Good Luck! ;]
Def. 5/5
-- Nicole xx