THE SILENT DEATH

by Happy With A New Start   Apr 21, 2008


No was around, no one would know
amethysts body would never be found
how would she die

i found her, her mind in another place
i slid my sword out of its holder

her body so unprepared
her mind so unaware
her soul not expecting to leave her so soon

i thrusted my sword through her slender body
she was wided-eyed as she floated towards the ground

i pulled my sword out of her
her body pouring blood that cover the floor

she gasped for her last breath
then as i watched her body it finally went motionless

amethyst was so unaware
it was so unfair

now she's dead, and still noone
is a ware

****ha ha ha ha****

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  • 15 years ago

    by TiMe hEaLs aLL wOuNdS

    This is really nice...and dark...5/5 for sure! but i think u forgot the word one after no in the first sentence haha

    btw thanx alot 4 ur comments on my poems =] they r must appriciated

  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    Wow,
    i really like this poem
    i enjoyed it great job 5/5... :D

  • 16 years ago

    by jane

    Wow i really like this

  • 16 years ago

    by Fallen Hero

    I love that *ha ha ha ha*
    it adds a comical effect

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