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by XAlwaysXBrokenX   Apr 21, 2008


These tears build up
and i want to cry
the pain is not worth my life
people criticize and judge
when the know shit about me
my life's going to hell
i want to freeze
and chill for a while
so everyone can see
the pain i go through
just to please
please the people who just don't care
who just don't give a damn if i am here or there
so ill give my life up
to make you happy
to please you people
so make it snappy

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  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Oh hunny this poem is so sad but yet has great stanza. I like the words you chose even though it was simply very sad. I hope you aren't feeling this way anymore hunny. I am here for you and if you want to talk about things I am willing to listen. 5/5 for this poem.