WoW!! this is really great.
it was a horrible dream...lol
Keep up the good work.
Awesome Work!!!

God bless u

So amzing
n so true
it has alot of depth in it
congrates bro :)
5/5

Strange ppl, strange experiences.... There r sum ppl who feel they hav not finished yet... They r searching for some more fun on other planets too....

Life is just strange at times n sumtimes d places we go become strange.. even d ppl... But we adapt to it somehow..

Nice one brother..

Keep writing..

Karan

That wonderfull. I luv it
i really like ur work

Sweet Adel,

What a creative poem you have penned!
Thank Allah it was just a dream!

Love,

Ingrid

A great poem! loved it! did u really have that dream??? just curious lol well anywayz hope u keep up this wonderfullest work!!!!
xoxo
-d ^^

Ohh :D how bad u imagine america in ur dreams :D funny poem

WAW its great story and i thought it was real but the last word tell me it was a dream, so interesting and powerful words you use here.
flow was nice and rhyme too 5/5 is the less i can do.

Wooow this was a reaaalllyy good poem i had no idea it would end lyke that.. very creative! keep it up!!!!

Omg that's sooooooo funny... and wierd
sometimes dreams feel like reality and reality feels like a dream

Oh my god, that dream is funny and scary at the same time,but it is really awesome.thanks god it was a dream.
by the way,thanks for your comments.it is my pleasure to read them.
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