Excellent poem. Very dark, very expressive, beautifully written.

Bravo, Brava that was one very brilliant write. All of it was great. It didnt end as most would think. So it was not cliche in anyway at all. The ending was amazing. Great write. 5/5

I really liked this piece, even though I think the very last line did nothing for it. Everything flows great, and the imagery is shocking, very good.