Comments : Your smart, u can figure this one out

  • 16 years ago

    by Harutan

    LOL i love it, that was great

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Haha! this was awesome! it's funny how you could miss the point even when it's right there! awesome:) right back at ya:D

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow....that was cool, I've never seen a poem written like that before..

  • 16 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    To be honest, I'm not into the whole love poetry thing. I think it has been done to death, and I am not a fan of the european origins of love poetry (petrarchan poetry), but the format you turned this into is innovative, unique, and straight cool. good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by XAlwaysXBrokenX

    That was cool!! that made my day a lot better!!