Woo hoo first comment =]
umm im sorry to say but i didnt like this poem but dont get me wrong it was ok..i just didnt like the rhyming and flow..and that just messed the whole thing up sorry =[

You have described your emotions very well...but the structure was a little off.. you can do much better...
also the ending was little faded compared to rest of the parts.. overall it was a nice write...