Let Destiny Sleep

by Suicidal Love   Apr 21, 2008


Led to the slaughter like lambs to the chop
The weak and the wicked I'm back at the top

Paradise in hell chokes them to the death
Theres no escape now draw your terminal breath

As the journey embarks, you'll try to get out
But your lightness of mind is now filled with doubt

Attempts to flee fail, get stabbed in the back
Crash to the floor with your life turning black

Blood trickles out, the stab wound so deep
Go ahead, fly, let destiny sleep

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    It has to be an art to write like you, this is amazing, just like each of the others.

  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    Once again great work. vivid and deep.

  • 14 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    I L-O-V-E this one from you! I absolutely adore the use of creative metaphors and I certainly do observe a healthy dose of them right here in a single poem. And I thought the title was well thought out, certainly captures my attention. Keep writing dear! XD

  • 15 years ago

    by katie

    Really good, keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I love the tittle of this piece, as for the poem itself its amazing =]
    The flow was great and it was strongly written, your a very talented writter!

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