by Tom Swart Apr 21, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
This love struggles to hold itself and to find strength from the past. |
by retha
Tormented be the soul to feel, reasured in time all scars grow and wounds heal. |
by Ken
Thsi was a great poem the way you used looping was perfect. The mean of the poem is very deep, deep enough to the point that I had to read it a second time. keep up the great work. |
Nice, I like the form that you used to write this poem. Its really interesting the way you wrote this. |
Tom you are obviously a gifted writer, that much is evident from reading your poems,this was a very clever poem and was so beautifully expressed, a resounding well done |
by gracey grey
This love struggles to hold itself and trys to find strength from its past. |