Your voice.

by Diana Barahona   Apr 21, 2008


Your voice is my compass when i get lost in your eyes,
its the momentum i need to keep my legs straight while you walk by.
It's the soothing waves in the ocean blue,
when i stand at the beach just thinking of you.

(that breeze that keeps me going through the day.
even when it rains, or hails, or thunders, it's always there to make it better in every possible way.)

Your voice is what calms me down when I'm speechless.
no stutters or slurs when i hear you voice.
your voice is always in my mind, it has no choice.
i think, i dream, i imagine, that your voice will always be in me head.
especially when I'm asleep, so sound asleep, alone in my bed.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Last stanza, second line, it's hear, not here.

    Last stanza, second to last line, it's my, not me.

    Same critique as the last one with the capitalization stuff.

    I think you should have gone more in depth with this poem. I felt a lot of it was repetition. The whole poem was basically saying, oh I love you and think about you all the time. That's great, but the way you're poem is setup I felt it could have gone into deeper though with metaphors and unique words or just describe more how he makes you feel or what goes through your mind.

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie B Crazy

    Wow! this is really good i love how you can express your emotion so clearly i like how discriptive you are! good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    ;o
    very good !
    sounds like quite a boy.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Another enjoyable poem to read! You write with passion and so much feeling and emotion. These two lines were so sweet!:

    "It's the soothing waves in the ocean blue,
    when i stand at the beach just thinking of you."

    Throughout this poem, I could see the whole picture in my head. Nice writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Mm, Another poem I liked to read. Full of passion, Full of mixed emotions. Not a bad way to share your love for someone. I am sure this person is mighty lucky to have a poem dedicated to them or about them. I love these kinds of poems.

    another 5/5 for you hun. :) Keep writing for you are a great poet.

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