I just came to check something, I'm sick. So you don't get the explaination of why i cried. It's a great poem...

Whisper, dear reader
Bitter hiss in this word
Alone: screaming underwater
Where your screaming isn't heard

^ ironic. that's all i will say....alone is beautiful when you stop caring...when nobody even gives a crap any more, how you can't help a single person. alone is so beautiful.

great job. thought i'd let you know, he gets the girl at the end of the book...and it's not a flipping fairy tale.

5.5

Wow, great flow and choice of wording. i miss the quotes at the bottom tho =/
5/5
xoxo
~waiting~