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by the dancing dreamer Apr 21, 2008 category : Dark, fantasy / other
Questions never answered Time is running out Hearts are hurt or broken Blood comes out the spout Clash of broken china Shattered on the floor Curses yelled and traded The slamming of the door Whispers in the darkness Letters hidden near Forbidden love discovered Wash away the fear Shattered hearts are crying No sight beyond the tears Broken souls are hiding Hoping someone hears
by FountainsOfBlood
Why has no one commented this? This is really good! Rhyming and flow is constistant, there's a good, clear image that comes to mind when reading this, wording is just perfect. 5/5 ~FountainsOfBlood