Comments : Young girl

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I love this poem, so much. It has so much hope, even for a sad poem. which is so great to see you write.

    young girl your so full of life
    Don't run back to your box of knifes
    Taking away your life so slowly
    What will happen when your best friend feels lonely.

    Will you be able to tell her its alright
    Make her smile through her whole day and night

    ^^ loved this part, the last line..I'm here hun. I'll always try to make you smile, ok? you're amazing. great poem.

    5.5