Comments : Back Into My Life

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This is sweet, Kayla...I hope he never hurts you. But if he does, I'm here...you know that, i tink. cuz we all love you tons, and we just want to see you happy.

    He reopens old, unwanted feelings,
    Finding out every thing he needs to know.
    Making me fall apart inside,
    These tears, they have a never ending flow.

    ^ definitely my fave stanza...it's very relatable. great job.

    *hugs*
    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    I'm sorry, maybe he wont'...

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Another well written piece from you hun, I can see why you needed to take a break from P&Q I just wish someone had filled me on with what has been going on.
    Im here for you, you can always talk to me:)

    5/5 --Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    A wonderful write by the wonderful Kayla. You did an amazing job of portraying your feelings in this one. It rhymed and flowed very well. and it was very relatable. I love how you ened it with a quesiton, it leaves the reader on edge and wanting more. this is a wonderful poem, and i hope things are working out for you. hang in there babe!

    ily!
    Kristina