Comments : ShAdOw RuSh~~

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I liked it. Twas cute. ^_^ My favorite lines were:
    A curse that I can't control.
    When darkness falls,
    And the moon is full.

    That was just perfect how you put those rhyming words together. It was simple, yet brilliant. I'll give you a four.

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    This kinda reminded me of a sereil killer. lol! it was shweet!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    OOO.. me loves!!.. lol.. great works!!.. ^-^

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    This is another great poem bro! keep it up and never give up!5/5
    **harlea

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    This poem was a little on the dark time but that's ok it was still really good filled with emotions
    5/5
    Wonderful Job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    I really liked it, the rhythm was great.