For the sight of pain line, don't you mean sigh of pain?

Anyways, I felt you used me too much. I looooovvvve vampires, but I just didn't feel this was your best work. I'll give it a three.

Whoa, it was creepy and gross, but at the sme time, sexy and eerie (in a cool way)! lol! i liked it a lot! =D

I love this really it's awsome

This is so very good bro.keep up the good work.5/5
**harlea

THis poem was absolutely amazing.....jus like you.....i loved how it was like kinda a creepy crawler poem.
5/5
Excellent Job Hun!!!!!

Chilling!!! nice work...

Good work love ur poem. 10/5