Its a very nice poem! and very heart felt, yeah it does say pretty much about everything of erica life, in a very short and precised poem! its well written, and loved the use of words...

keep up the good work

What a tragic sad poem, it's easy to understand why she would want to go if she was trapped in a life of misery sadness and torture. I hope you get comfort from this poem that you have written, at least now she is safe, happy free as a bird, and is able to sleep tight. Sorry for your loss i can see how important she was to you. sad, but a great poem.xx

WOW.. such emotion!!.. so very sad.. but very good!!!! amazing..

Nice poem i like it very good

Aww hun thats straight from the heart x very sad but very well put together x its hard losing someone you love x she'd be very proud of you and im sure she knew how much you loved her x take care huni x

Wow amazing . Its such a deep poem.
Im really sorry for your loss. I know its very hard.Just keep writing, if anything do it for her cause youve got a talent on your hands that im sure she wouldnt want go to waste and it really is a releasing mechanism.

My heart really goes out to you, It's always terrible when you lose someone that you love and the worst part is that it always happens to the people who don't deserve it. so I congratulate u on staying so strong and allowing people to see your poems as there are so many other people who can relate to you. Your poems are so beautifully written! and have got so many emotions, I know its hard but I don't think Erica would want to be remembered for all the hurt and pain she went through, why don't you try write a tribute on the amazing things that she had i life, ie the day she met you... etc... just a suggestion as it may help you a lot at the same time!

I dont know what to say...your poems are very very touching and moving and just really really reach out. you get the message across as to just how much goes on. thankyou for sharing your poems, i understand it must have been so hard to write some of these. keep writing, i think your work is amazing and your a truly gifted writer. xxx

Sad and expressive, great poem.