Destiny Vs Hard work...

They saw great things in you,
They expected failures from me,
But your charades, I can see through,
From these chains, I will break free,

They said, greatness was your destiny, your fate,
I believe that greatness is achieved through perseverance,
I know that, my greatness, is up to me to create,
I don't care if you try to stop me, I'm not afraid of any interference...

I've tried so hard, and I've failed so often,
But my will, will never soften,
My heart will stay strong,
Into rights, I will turn all my wrongs...

I'm finally here, it's the top
But now all I want to do is drop,
And do it all again,
Hard work will be my eternal refrain...

(This is my first serious poem... please rate and leave comments.. :/)