Comments : Look through me

  • 16 years ago

    by RaInIe XiOnG

    Wow! this is such a good poem
    it fits me and my ex rite now!
    keep up the good jobs!

    <3RaInI3 Xi0Ng^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    This poem was very beautiful and touching. your sadness was expressed very clearly and i can completely relate to this. very well done. keep it up :)

    best part...

    "Look into my eyes,
    Tell me what you do you see?
    Can you see your own reflection?
    As my tears drop your image is embedded on them,
    Sparkling as it hits the ground,
    That's how I cry without a sound..."

    i love it. 5/5