by Lonely Rider Apr 22, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Hiding you... |
by anurag
Wow..this is amazing.. but you could have improved ypur word choice.. |
I can picture different types of emotions in this poem very well written good job! :) 4/5 |
Ohhhh...U r amazin and ur poem is so damn nice...No words can describe how beautiful is ur poem..keep it up5/5 |
by Nix
Beautiful poem, so authentic and powerful but I don't understand why you explained your metaphors on the end, still amazingly written piece. You expressed so strong emotions and I admire original idea within this poem, repetition was quite impressive. Excellently written. |
If this is not wonderful// than wonder whers beauty n watz beauty... |