Because..I am not Beautiful??

by Lonely Rider   Apr 22, 2008


Hiding you...
the fog formed a Veil,
yet, I tried to reach out
But to no avail..

With love in my eyes,
and a Life to share,
thought you would notice
but you hardly cared...
Hardly cared....Why???
Because I am not Beautiful??

Dreams of varied color,
with you I had sown,
but sandcastles get washed away,
I should have known...
washed away....Why??
Because I am not Beautiful??

In the stillness of night,
Your voice I sought,
A Stone- cold silence,
is all that I got...
Silence....Why??
Because I am not Beautiful??

I stood against all odds,
took a path unknown,
but still I can't stand up,
to the fact, I am left alone...
Alone....Why??
Because I am not Beautiful??

[This is a work of frustrated mind...
I am fed up with the fab surrounding beauty and glamour
I got so frustrated that I simply penned down whatever I felt...

In the poem, the fog and veil refer to the idea of beauty that has formed in people's mind which does not let then see the fact that - Even is someone is not Beautiful they have the capacity to Love...]

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  • 16 years ago

    by anurag

    Wow..this is amazing.. but you could have improved ypur word choice..

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    I can picture different types of emotions in this poem very well written good job! :) 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Ohhhh...U r amazin and ur poem is so damn nice...No words can describe how beautiful is ur poem..keep it up5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Beautiful poem, so authentic and powerful but I don't understand why you explained your metaphors on the end, still amazingly written piece. You expressed so strong emotions and I admire original idea within this poem, repetition was quite impressive. Excellently written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    If this is not wonderful// than wonder whers beauty n watz beauty...

    Beauty is not that is visible itz always hidden within d souls.... like fog, illusions, mirages, n offcourse veil...

    Nice one... Keep writing

    best wishz..