If this is not wonderful// than wonder whers beauty n watz beauty...

Beauty is not that is visible itz always hidden within d souls.... like fog, illusions, mirages, n offcourse veil...

Nice one... Keep writing

best wishz..

Beautiful poem, so authentic and powerful but I don't understand why you explained your metaphors on the end, still amazingly written piece. You expressed so strong emotions and I admire original idea within this poem, repetition was quite impressive. Excellently written.

Ohhhh...U r amazin and ur poem is so damn nice...No words can describe how beautiful is ur poem..keep it up5/5

I can picture different types of emotions in this poem very well written good job! :) 4/5

Wow..this is amazing.. but you could have improved ypur word choice..