Wow i love this .. the first stanza reminded me of the poem i wrote that you gave me so much confidence with .. love it mwa xx

The poem is so nice...It reminded me of some memories...I loved the flow of it,I think it was wonderful..
U did a great job so keep it up..

The way you hold me close to you
as we stare into the rain.
I love that line.
grate form I feel it girl