Comments : Moved on...!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    This poem was amazing from start to finish. I loved how you opened it and it all went smoothly together.
    5/5

    Cheers xo

  • Well i though it was good,. i like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachelle

    Good job i liked your poem

  • 16 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    Great job.
    I enjoyed it!
    Keep it up!!

    And thank you for the comment on mine.