Comments : Far Away From You

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Loved It
    I could relate to this at one point in my life. I think a lot of people can and that makes it a great write.

    "she's what keeps my heart beating as if she is the one that flows through my bloodstream."
    ^^my fav part of the attire =)

    Great voice and perfect choice of vocabulary
    Overall, perfectly and beautifully written
    5/5