by Kaitlyn Gilbertson Apr 22, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
His ancient hands carve with the worn knife. |
by Tom Swart
Wow I really like this poem as well as the story, this is my kind of poem , bravo. you have a very mature way of writing for a young person. I look forward to more and think that free style of poetry is my favorite where ones poems aren't penned as a result of looking for words to rhyme, where emotions aren't lost as result of finding no words to fill that style of writing. nice. cool runnings |