by JustKristina
*shudders* |
by Melpomene
I liked the darkness you portrayed within this piece, it was definitly quite chilling and eerie. You placed such terrible scenes into the mind whilst I was reading this. |
It was smooth, nice, very very dark!lol, I liked it! I dont care what anyone else says, it was great! keep it up! |
by Natalie
I actually liked it lol. It was different. More like a story, but with rhyming. |
by Blissful
I loved how this was different and took me to another place. The words you used to describe each scene was flawless and got you message across nicely. I could feel the emotions you expressed and overall this was a great piece to read . *5/5* |
by PAIGE
I thought it was good (: |
by she
Like how you add your voice in this. |