OH. MY. GOODNESS.

^ I'm that speechless...no joke. this poem is so just...mind blowingly good...just like...dang..

Sitting here upon my bed, so alone, so distraught,
Listening to the deafening silence that surrounds,
I can hear the fading echoes of all we used to be,
And it seems to me I've surely lost my ground.

^^ this stanza is really relatable, but instead of a lover, a friend. which is wonderful how flexible that is..truly wonderful.

just like....pshh....i can't thiink of anything to say...just wow...great job. the imagery, word choice, all of it...i haven't seen a love poem i liked in a long time, great.

5/5 ((i wish i cud give u more!!))

I like the way you write, you really get into the words, the events, the live's of your characters. My favorite stanza was the third one, because the first three lines of it were written brilliantly. I love the way you see things, and how you put them. Quite unique, I feel. Good piece.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for your comments on my poems 'Movie Love' and 'When'.

Splendid poem, idk why people didn't vote or comment on it yet

this poem is amazing

Who Knew You could Write Child... :)

You are amazing!