by RB Apr 22, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I remember when our hearts were intertwined, |
by LiNa
I love this poem and can relate to it alot like it was me there. sad to think about it in a way though. great poem 5/5 |
by Tom Swart
They say that it is impossible to remember physical pain and as hard as i try I can't remember what it felt like to slam my fingers with a hammer. I do believe though that the pain of a broken heart or lost love can be felt over and over again at will. This poem will bring back the memories of the pain that inspired it for many years to come if it was indeed true love. Nice write bud, peace |
Very touching and passionate poem. it's so beautiful yet sad poem. i loved the choice of words |
A nice piece, and well written too. At times it seemed like the lines were a little too long, but only at times. I liked you wording and rhymes, too. |
by jLegendc
Frickin' awesome poem! i liked how you chose words that could describe what u truly feel... i can actually feel every word you wrote... NICE! |