I wish we had, what we will never get!

by Unamed   Apr 22, 2008


Lying in a field of flowers,
& looking up at the cloud-filled sky,
being able to think about anything,
i only have you on my mind.

So much for thinking about anything.
the sculpture of your face will not escape my mind.
When my eyes close, i see your chocolate eyes.
When i reopen my eyes, i see your smile.
You just seem to always be there.

It seems our love is forbidden.
No one will agree of the feelings we share.
They judge us of our past,
and never for what we will be.

Its seems our love is just as tragic,
as when Shakespear wrote his plays.
You are my Romeo,
I am your juliet.
Lets hope, the ending will change.

In the field, i have nothing but time,
time to think of this judging world.
They need to see us for wat we are,
Not what we were.

I love the way u say this will workout,
Deep inside i know its not true, but i'll have that hope.
I'll allways have the hope for
wat i wish we had, but we will never get.

Aly

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  • 16 years ago

    by Empathy

    I really enjoyed the similes that appeared throughout this poem, and the poem in general is sweet, genuine, and hopeful. The emotion is expressed well. I like the reflection that you sort portray when you mention you are "in the field" how you can sustain the time held there because in those moments nothing else is evident. A very interesting write indeed. Great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kianna

    This poem is great...i love it

    5/5 dah

  • 16 years ago

    by elly

    This was so good t.t
    it reminds me of my two friends right now =/
    amazingly, he has brown eyes too. o.o

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    I love this poem! it has such a great vibe that would make me wanna read it over again

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw, ts realy good i enjoy reading.
    nice flow and deep feeling of love.
    to have hope and cant get it
    to see dreams and you wish if come true
    i know how is this feel hurt and you did great jop to write these feeling, 5/5