Valentine Cards

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Apr 23, 2008


Just another sad character
Crying till her plot twist
She's writing in the corner
Valentine cards on her wrist

Writing out her tears
A twisted valentine
Mocking valentines etched on her wrists
Crimson ink, "be mine?"

Twisted mocking valentines
Screaming in red ink
Eyes release the coldest tears
Every time she blinks

Eyes release the coldest tears
The tears come falling down
No, the tears aren't falling
They're crashing to the ground

Write another thought out
Another valentine
On her wrist in violent red
Crimson valentine design

It's not even Valentine's Day
Mid-May April Fools
Valentine's is for finding love
Love doesn't follow any rules

April fools
He won't love her back
Those lines on her wrists
Match the hearts little cracks

He doesn't know that,
Let's call "him" Bill,
She wishes he'd like her
But he never will

Here's that plot twist
Bill likes her a lot
He was gonna tell her yesterday
But I guess Bill forgot

Bill made up his mind
3 o'clock last night
Hes gonna tell her tomorrow
At morning's first light
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~DAWN~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bill is at her house
Mom says she's in her room
Bill wonders if he should tell her
Or would that be too soon

Bill does it on an impulse
Creaks open that door
Valentine cards spilled across the room
Broken hearts can't bleed anymore

valentine cards across the room. she bled out... yet again

no quote this time. sorry u guys. also when i say loosely based on a friend, i mean. cutting yes, dying no

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  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    ~April fools
    He won't love her back
    Those lines on her wrists
    Match the hearts little cracks~

    wow, beautiful! very sad and tragic. i can relate 2 the first half. u have some great talent! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    I can't say how sad this is, it's..so sad,
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by lonelydreamer

    I love the way u used the theme of valentine's day. it has a lot of emotion. it really touched me. very nice

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I almost threw up by the end of this. that speaks for itself.