Comments : Heartbreaker

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Like the title, good poem xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Well written...
    good word choice...

    theres so much sadness filled in each line..

    "an afterlife
    in clouds
    will protect the
    unrequited spirits
    from dealing
    their heart to
    the devil
    one last time..."

    ^^ i loved this part... actually the way you have written it...

    keep writing..