Nawww an amazing piece of poetry, so sweet and sincere and deep 5/5 almost at 100, i'll buy you a V when you get there ;p

Keep Writing, lovely,
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Waiting is all I seem to ever do it seems
At night, I wait for you even in my dreams

These 2 lines were a little off for me. If you took the first seem out and just left it as "Waiting is all I ever do it seems" that would help.

I enjoyed the piece otherwise, i thought you did a good job, it seemed very honest and true and on some level I think we can all relate at some time in our lives.