Sonnet On Alone Feelings

by Biya   Apr 23, 2008


Footsteps died on the shore
As waves passed by

When I saw reality of life
I thought to die

Why it gives pain alot ?
When someone we love lie!

Footsteps, I made till her door
Vanished to remain no more

They were only silent signs
To tell her how deep love is mine !

She never knows how alone I feel
She gave me the wounds which will never heal

How can I say her unfaithful ?
Shes my love and love can never be unfaithful !

(Note: Here she can be replaced by He )

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  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Your poem is really touching and it reminded me of some friends who had broken my heart one day.
    nice poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Sad poem but nicely written. It's very good to read. Well done! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ali Khan

    When I saw reality of life
    I thought to die

    Why it gives pain alot ?
    When someone we love lie!

    ahhh u know wat this is wht i experience every hour of my life and srsly i know how much it hurts...and u have expressed all my feelings....love it i m touched!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Marvellous sonnet... n there r various styles n techniques so adaptations for this form of poetry..

    Read each line n enjoyed the journey hidden behind each word, each line..

    N if u wud have worked a bit on it, it wud have added to the wonder..

    Best written, keep writing..

    Best wishz..

    Karan

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