Marvellous sonnet... n there r various styles n techniques so adaptations for this form of poetry..

Read each line n enjoyed the journey hidden behind each word, each line..

N if u wud have worked a bit on it, it wud have added to the wonder..

Best written, keep writing..

Best wishz..

Karan

When I saw reality of life
I thought to die

Why it gives pain alot ?
When someone we love lie!

ahhh u know wat this is wht i experience every hour of my life and srsly i know how much it hurts...and u have expressed all my feelings....love it i m touched!!!

Sad poem but nicely written. It's very good to read. Well done! :)

Your poem is really touching and it reminded me of some friends who had broken my heart one day.
nice poem.