A very touching poem and the part about false promises I exspecially liked...it seems so unfair when someone promises something and shatters your hopes simply by not sticking to that promise....I never understand those who do that....is it that they get pleasure from hurting someone in that way?

I think you did an excellent job to describe how one feels when people mistreat us. Mostly hateful things on world are lying, betraying, cheating.

Good job, keep on writing. :)

Hey :) i like ur writing style..it is strange,but in a good way :) ur poems are different from others..keep write :)

LOL, I liked it. :) Very, very good write. I liked the end. o.O 5/5

Weeeeellllll its a good poem but a lil very diffrent i liked the idea u've got ur own style...and thats a good thing.