Comments : Time

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    "Reality is in it's present
    Why to bother about the future now?
    What's lost is forever lost.
    Dreaming is of no use without love
    Minds waiting in distress for seasons to change
    Heart knows, some changed things change no more
    Now it's our turn alone to adjust & change. "

    I don't remember how it was who said this, but anyway, the person said "beautiful things won't last forever"..

    But after loosing love..we should rethink the meaning of life... Why to make so great investment for relationship which are vulnerable and unstable... By making investment to divine love we can never feel there is no use of dreaming.. That is not true.. As long as there are dreams we are still alive.. When we stop dreaming we are preparing to death...

    And I think you have sooooo much to experience before that... Some many places you have not seen yet.. So many people you have not meet yet...

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    "Now thorns don't prick anymore
    Pain is so very kind
    Memories haunt no more
    Happiness is easy to find."

    If only that were so true in life but thorns do prick and pain is found everywhere in our eyes. As always an excellent one. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by C P Sharma

    Now thorns don't prick anymore
    Pain is so very kind
    Memories haunt no more
    Happiness is easy to find.

    Wonderful poetry of a mature mind who has really understood life. An equipoised state of mind above pleasure and pain. These four lines in themselves make a complete poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by vivian robb

    Wow youyr an amazing writer..
    i love this poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh I love the ending of this poem, it just sums up the whole point in the poem. Well done.

    I would suggest using paragraphs in this poem :)
    - it's inly a suggestion :)

    Keep it up, thanks for the comment.
    Btw I love your quotes in your page :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    No truer words could be spoken about what each of us must endure and then move on. A nice poem and I enjoyed the moment when reading it. What more could anyone ask for?

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Stunning poem!
    great use of words!
    and i bet, well i hope your friend enjoyed the poem. i know i liked it!
    5/5 :)