Comments : KYLE

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Oh My Gawd.

    the last line was mindblowingly good. great job...and i normally hate acrostics!!

    5.5

  • OMG I LOVE IT IT IS SO AWSOME

  • 16 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    So true! this was a great poem! I loved it! with such few words you really gave us a lot.
    5/5
    great work