by X Harlea X Apr 23, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
As i lay here in my bed, |
by Dustin S
Harlea, so sad. good poem! (p.s, if it had to do w/ me, i'm soooo sorry.) 5/5 |
by Baby Rainbow
Good job xxx |
Very sad poem great job only thing I can see that needs changed is it says she tears and I am sure u meant see tears thanks for your comment on my poem |