by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Apr 23, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
first love
[1] |
by RB
That was beautiful and breathtaking. it honestly brought tears to my eyes. i'm not sure which part of this piece i connected to, it may have been the idea of growing up or the idea of a relationship ending, but all in all it was a great piece. the flow was perfect, and it has this realness to it that made it very heartfelt and emotional. well done. 5/5 |
by Espoirfailed
I loved this, you managed to make it convincing and use rhyme well all throughout. it was a beautiful sad poem and i felt every line. the story was so heartfelt but i wasn't actually sure of the ending, maybe you meant it to be like that? |