Hidden Path

by Billy   Apr 23, 2008


This can be read A-B but then it can also be read with all the A lines first, and immediately followed by the B lines. This way will sound like a choppy story.

A- Having light for many years,
B- Trying to fight all my tears,
A- Seeing the path all laid out,
B- Trying my hardest not to shout,
A- As the end lingered near,
B- I looked up and saw no fear,
A- This is when your eyes went blank,
B- I fell to my knees wanting to break,
A- Seeing that there was nothing left,
B-I felt my heart explode in my chest,
A- Looking back for something wrong,
B- How could i carry on,
A- Back tracking on that darken path,
B- My body quakes from the past,
A- Finding the Path that i had missed,
B- Wondering if this.....this was it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    That was interesting to say the least, kinda confusing why you'd read it like that, but then you get kinda confused ya know? its unique i've been on this site for years and i really can't remember reading anything that compares to this, or is even wrote in this structture. its good

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow this is really good ive never read one liek this before, well done xx

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