Awwww i like this one xx

Wow at first i didnt think this was gonna be very good.. but i actually loved it.. i dont know why but i did.. its really good. great job. 5/5

I thought is waz good

Alot of poeple, who would read this poem, would basically go wow that dead, cause its basic..and obviously has a hidden meaning (sarcasim) its basic, yeah its repetition over and over again. but thats kinda funky.

to love someone and have them throw everything back at you, is like a blow in your face. theres bearly a flow and it reminds me of a nusery rhyme.