by Latosha Conatser Apr 23, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I've seen you look my way, |
I liked this poem but the flow was a little off. Overall though it was good. Keep writing |
by Brittany C
I like this poem. It might flow a little better if you were to make the sentences the same length. I still give it a 5/5 because that is such a small thing to fix. |