Comments : The Two of You...

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I like this poem. It might flow a little better if you were to make the sentences the same length. I still give it a 5/5 because that is such a small thing to fix.

  • 16 years ago

    by DarkCrystalbtrfy

    I liked this poem but the flow was a little off. Overall though it was good. Keep writing
    Well Written