Take It Away

by Wishmaster   Apr 23, 2008


All these years
All I've seen
All these tears
It's time to come clean

So take it away
So far out
On this beautiful day
Take it away and shout

Suddenly, things have turned
For the worst
I feel burned
I feel cursed

But take it so far away
So far out
On this beautiful day
Take it away and shout

This is not it
This cannot be
I will not doubt one bit
I am FREE!!!!!

So take it away
So far out
On this beautiful day
Take it away and shout

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxcharlottexx

    Love ur poem:))

  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    This has a structure and scheme that says to me "This is a song". I wonder if perhaps that was what you had in mind. It's got a nice pace to it: simple and effective.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    Amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    -blinks- o.o

    you wrote that?...
    like seriously...??
    damn.
    uhh... I didn't know you had that in ya! xDD
    that was really good Gouge...
    high five!!

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